Dear all,
I am preparing an individual 1h- presentation
But I afraid to make some mistakes,
not for vocabulary, but the time or preposition things
so if you dear have sometime and glad to help
please contact me lol.


In return, I can help your french xD


Have a nice day′~


Here is the begenning of my presentation, it's about RMB trading and there are some econometric (ARCH, GARCH)

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Oh one more thing, if you use 'recently', delete the word 'in' in front of it.

For the first sentence, 'recent year' is grammatically wrong. Better change it to 'recent years', or simply use 'recently' would be perfectly fine.

Here are some small suggestions...
I think in the beginning part, you'd better attrack ur audiences' attention, for it's a 1-h presentation. U can add some small cases or events(related to nowadays hot topics) to draw their attention. And then, put on those statistics and phenomenons.
example: Britain left EU's impact on RMB→illustrate stability or sth. else (I didn't search about those information. So there might be some mistakes…)
Ps. I was attracted by ur French helps...
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