I plan to take a competition. But I do not believe myself. I hope someone could help me to check my composition before it is sent to the system of the examination.
Please, help me. If you can help me, please let me know. I will appreciate you a lot.

What‘s the topic of yourcomposition？

I really want to do like what you said,but the topic of the composition hasnt been noticed...I really hate that...Then, could help me?

Oops.

why dont you finish it, and add it as an attachment, so that anyone passing by can examine it and edit it for you >:D