Well...I also have some gramma issue.
Here just what I thought.
For the Attributive Clauses in first sentence, you should say:
"which made my English score pretty low."
there should no 'it' before the verb. For the use of 'make', make sth + adj., so here "my English score' as a noun, "low" as an adjective, there should no "is" between them. Otherwise, you should say sth like 'make sb do sth', obvious, it doesn't really work here.
For the second sentence, just a little bit awkward...'have' is not a perfact verb to describe what you want...well...just in my opinion...>_<...use 'figure out' or 'find out' instead of 'have'.
For the fourth one, not exactly errors, but it is better to remove 'so that' and change "can't " to "don't " ...(关于can't和don't我只能说这事一种感觉上的事情,don't只是表达一种不能,而can't更有一种主观上的完全没有可能性的不能。呃……这个是有点吹毛求疵……只是怎么读都觉得有一些些别扭……)Then at the end of this sentence, "its" should be replaced by “them” to represent “English words”.
So...that's all...
If you have any thoughts, let me know...we can discuss about it.
However I don't have a good way to memorize words...>_<...Sorry for this.
[ 此贴被chantelle在2010-02-15 08:13重新编辑 ]