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[Free Talk] May you have a good and happy day everyday

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非淡泊无以明志,非宁静无以致远
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the year of tiger is coming.review this year's life,  many things are  not so good, but be confident about the next year , I can be better if i try my best to do.  Don't  be  afraid  of the things happened to me , I can do it  because i think i can.  the trouble stand before us is our experence of being capablity;the mistakes  have made will be my unforgetable memory. tomorrow will be better, next year will have an improvement.

Happy New Year for everyone!


May you have a good and happy day everyday!
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  • 展雯

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    Happy new year. Thank ..

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十周年!蛋蛋加油!
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From the title there is a mistake,and then  "well"only describes one's bady is fine but not something. The third "try one's best to do something ",you add another"one".The "afraid" is a ad. and you should use "be afraid of/to do"."What will happen" should be "something will happen to me".What does  "I can because" mean?Maybe you want to say "I can believe".
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There are really so many mistakes ...I don't want to correct all of them.

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thank you for your help.

I have corrected some.


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O(∩_∩)O心态平和永远最美,天天快乐才对!
举报 只看该作者 板凳   发表于: 2010-02-13 0
Happy new year!

May you have a good time during the 2010.

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happy new year


玉伯乐。

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举报 只看该作者 沙发   发表于: 2010-02-13 0
you too,
happy new year ~

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happy new year

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